We Make Sun Sigh

In this head of mine
yellow sun shines fine
when you sign on the line
that agrees to align,
in this heart,
with mine.

Yellow sun
will unwind
to bind and entwine
in threads of shimmering shine
two spines to combine and
make them as one!
Captured - You're mine

Tangled in this display,
no regret
and no dismay,
you twine this golden ray,
and climb, singing,
"oh, oh, oh
this shine is mighty fine
Today, tomorrow
in joy, in sorrow
It's fine,
when you're mine."
and the wind stops hissing
a minute to chime.

lol, being in love means you write nothing else but love poetry, this is an apology. :P

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Claireabelle-
November 9
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I like this a lot... Very easy read!
PerfectTonight
March 26

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Such beautiful imagery unravels as you read this piece, it is very beautiful. YOu most definitely have a knack for rhyme, though it seemed to kind if hinder any message you were trying to convey.

Then again, I'm not a huge fan of a lot of rhyme.....

I loved -

"in threads of shimmering shine
two spines to combine and
make them as one!
Captured - You're mine"

Very well penned and full of love.
estbelle
March 26

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I agree with them, I wish to write love poetry and much more be in love and write about it

Captured - You're mine
I love this part

Reminded me of the song Walking on Sunshine...
VierSinneNur
March 26

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You have no need to apologize! I love the constant rhyme throughout it. Very nice, can definitely relate to the emotions in this. I love the first stanza the most.
Viyanna Rosemarie
March 26

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well, there is nothing wrong with love poetry at all nor is there anything wrong with being in love. you are lucky to have both at this time. thank you for sharing this with me today. viyanna rosemarie