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A Jewel in Nature's Crown

Tuck in a corner, unexpected
a jewel in Nature's crown
the music of water tumbling o'er
sun kissed sandstone,
world cares floating away,
calming a rapidly beating heart,
peace descends, harmony
established, my soul refreshed,
continuing on its way,
life reaffirmed.

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  • Mina28
    April 5
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    I love this poem! Lovley word flow. "the music of water tumbling o'er
    sun kissed sandstone" << Beautiful line!


  • penman gold member
    March 30
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    Wonderful

    What a terrific write for the picture. So very well expressed. Thank you for sharing.

  • this is lovely, very nice flow along with the picture ,with serenity, thank you for this entry
    MM