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Novocain


Mouth of my soul:

a kiss from numb lips,
stumbling over a dead tongue.
How to express
this non-feelings?


Where does it hurt?

Just stick me
with the needle again.

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Prompt:

I felt numb inside....
but I couldn't figure out why

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  • Kari gold member
    March 26
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    wow..ouchy...a lot of pain felt in this one.
    Thanks for your entry