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lv...The Path

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We walk the same path

                  into our reclining years

 

not knowing the difficulties we face

         the pains or the crystal tears

 

Both of us dream of feeling better

    as we struggle through each day

 

knowing that we share our love

   gives us strength to walk the way

 

You have problems with your lungs

         and my heart is growing weak

 

no one understands our problems

          or the passion in life we seek

 

Your happiness to me is important

            as we climb the pending hill

 

the path we follow is getting darker

           and our demise is closer still

 

 

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  • this is beautifully sad from you. thank you for sharing it with me and i am looking forward to reading more from you in the near future. viyanna rosemarie

    ps--where did you find this background? i love it.

    • Thanks for commenting, happy you like it...

      I have had the BG a long time, don't remember where I got it...

  • This poem is so true.
    I thought the picture went well with this poem, It was such a great write and I liked it alot with the rhyme.

    You have problems with your lungs
    and my heart is growing weak

    no one understands our problems
    or the passion in life we seek.

    Those lines were real good!

  • Papagallo
    March 26

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    I like this poem of growing old together. The words are soft and loving. To grow old together and perhpas died together; that, to me, is a beautiful life.

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