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Poet’s Void



I type a few words…

[delete]
            [delete]
                        [delete]

and think to myself…
      Is this really me?
Oh!  but it is,
                 
                        inside-out



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  • Bruce silver member
    April 7
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    Loved it! very inventive! Nice job, my friend!


  • grannyeri gold member
    March 28

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    Very creative. Need to get back to reading some of my favorite's poetry more often and regularly. Think I have gone through some of this of what you write - but need to get back into just writing and letting the words flow. Have a great day!


  • Desdmona
    March 27

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    I like the deletes. It adds to the poem. I understand the message and I like the style. Good job and good luck.


  • poet2angels gold member
    March 26

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    I am having a block now but you, my dear are not...This is Mally magic once again
    You always make me sigh

    Lynda


  • suseann
    March 26

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    Keep the faith in your muse'. It's alive and awake as indicated here.

  • Rowan gold member
    March 26
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    'inside-out'... kaboom! Excellent.


  • motel silver member
    March 26

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    great take on the prompt and I like the structure of the piece.
    the brevity of the piece gives one much to think about ... I, in my " inside-out ", connected the last line with the title.
    being a void, letting the energy flow thru without any preconceived ideas, might be the best state for a writer. maybe writer's block is sometimes necessary.
    thanks and good luck in the contest.

  • been there many times. this poem says more than some others. sometimes less is more.


  • Namita
    March 26

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    great way to express writer's block... keep writing... and get out of the block one like you must not be in a block...


  • Naughtygrlred
    March 26
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    I think that sums it up preety good. Great poem.

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