Too bad you didn't know,
I know I didn't show,
how sad and lonely, how depressed,
i am and always have been,
but you could have told me you were deleting everything,
so when I sent only you an email telling you to tell everyone i was killing myself,
you never read it, like a dusty book on a rickety old book shelf,
one you had to read, but never saw,
so when they found me dead, no one knew, and it was all your fault
declared homicide,
its all a lie,
because I sent you a suicide note,
and you didn't bother to read it before you deleted your account...
A contest entry
- 42nd contest on AP and a random 42nd contest!! yay! by Beverlynohime.
490 points, ended April 8, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I was deployed last year and it was one of lowest points of my life. It seemed like friends and family were to busy to talk or even comfort me. The pain I was feeling was so deep and my way out was with words. Sometimes I have even felt like that was not enough how could anybody feel the way I do and live. But I made it though with such high hopes for the future. My way of thinking was I live my life the way I want to and forget what other people say or don't say. I made it though and now I am home to see another day because my life is more important then giving in to someone or something!!!
Great write but always remember life is not always so hard keep your head up and smile it always helps!!!
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This is great. I love this wonderful sad write.
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You write really good poems i don't understand why people don't comment on it much? But yea good poems.
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I LIKE IT :)
I REALLY LIKE THIS POEM. IT DESCRIBES FEELINGS UNFELT OR UNSEEN
♥SHERI♥
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This is really morbid but wow. Beautiful! All your work is, keep writing!
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Quite interesting. The tragic irony is so morbid and beautiful, it makes me smile. Its grief and hatered, made this poem's malice glow brightly. Great write definetly!
Sincerely,
Lonelywolf Tasagka
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