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Hold The Blade

Hold the blade
Don't be afraid
Hold it tight
So things feel alright

Don't know where to begin
Choosing where to start on the skin
It's time to stop thinking & start dancing
Every second the blades advancing

Sadness turns into pain
Pain turns into strain
The blood falls down my arm
There's no way to stop my self harm

Every time I dig deeper I'm slipping further away
From that day when I can truly say 'everything's ok'
More & more of me are now scarred forever
But no-one will know about it whatsoever

I slip more into this coma everyday
But there's no end for my ways
It's time to pretend
That i'll always attend
But I know one day, I wont be here

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  • StarEyes
    March 26

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    what a read this one is! I love this the pain in this one, but yet, it leaves me very afraid for you. What a wonderful job you did on this one. I did see some typos in this, but they do not distract from the read itself.