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Ululant

helical ensembles of collected upheavals
thrown up and outward in rainbow procession
twisting through the twilight
in a raw ecstacy of shivering outburst
chilling the shattered edges of the sky
as it makes way for the upwelling
of passion unleashed
in fiery wrath to cut swathe before it
as if a Hell's legion of voracious dragons were given birth
by its radiant will.

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  • The Fun House silver member
    April 17

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    I read the first part of this, I thought it was dying from poison seriously I did! Nice twist on this one.