Take time to Realize
step back and think about
Suffering's always comes in different size
Don't let it get you from the inside out
Hold still and be strong
Don't fill your head with negativity
Try to sing a holy song
Be hopeful even if the sun doesn't shine brightly
He will never test Thee
something you can't handle the strive
rejoice and bring Praise for god almighty
only then you can receive the crown of life
Author notes
My first ever
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What did you think
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Hi
Just reading again
Rick -
Poet
You must right more to please your readers. we need more...Crowns of life from your pen. Come on gal you can do it. -
Very Good
Nice first verse
Rick -
Excellent "First" Write as I had stated earlier--Now, it's time to compose your
"Second" Write!!!
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Very Good
Lovely thoughts
very well done
Rick
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I wrote this for you ...
http://allpoetry.com/poem/5665767
It starts with the words of your comment on my poem Soul Space.
Love to you, Precious.
Myra -
Beautiful words ...
You should write some more.
Ah. The crown of life ... We carry that with humbleness but also joyously.
Love to you, Precious.
Myra
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I think you did an awesome job ... full of feeling and truth. My only suggestion would be for you to capitalize God...Great work. Thank you for reading my poetry. It is much appreciate.
Sam
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Nice job, and thanks for sharing here poet!
Peace, poeticweaver
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The crown of life. Much desired by many and gained by few. Nicely penned dear poet. -
Very nice! Let's see another!!!
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claps and Praise God.
wonderful inspiration for your first poem
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AT LAST !!!!!!!
AT LAST--AT LAST--AT LAST
You have written your first composition on AP!
I agree with Spiritual Poet's statement below that You couldn't have picked a better subject to start out with.
I'm glad to see you tackled a form of "Rhyming"
poetry because I can relate to it and that is basically the only type of poetry I write.
You did well!
Now that you got your feet wet and jumped into the pool with the rest of us, the next step is to enter a couple of contests!
It's really great to see you writing--Keep it up!
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very nice
You picked a nice subject to start with my friend. I am glad you started writing. God bless you, Mark
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If only. In such times as these when our God is much needed, it seems that man has decided to become his own god. Happy writing and you did a great job with this piece.
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