I saw you walking near at hand
The first time I felt the holy land
It was you my demand
my heart begun to expand
It was unplanned
to make a stand
as i give you my pretty glance
suddenly air has fanned
How come I felt
an intense feeling of death
when you staring is gone
I hate when your not around
When I hear you voice
i felt a joy
even when you shout so loud
I hear a sweet sound
How I long to feel your lips
A sudden tear run down my cheek
It's impossible to be with you
I felt my heart is being brew
A star has fallen
I think I have a token
take the chance to wish
I hope you never cherish!
As we meet again
I have no defense
you are really strong
loving you can't go wrong
A contest entry
- I'm Crazy....but OH WELL!!! PREWRITE CONTEST!!!! by Kathraina.
575 points, ended April 18, 296 entries
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Comments
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Aww this is so tender and lovely.
Marvelous piece!
Bravo!!!
♥ Kate -
This is great! One can feel the emotions, and the love in these words! Great job! I love it!!
Best of luck in this contest!
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