Where did the wind in my breath
just go?
I can't find it and I
miss it so.
I think it was a punch
I felt.
Or an insult that you
just dealt.
Why did you have to play
that card?
Did you know that statement would hit me
so hard?
I cannot blame myself
for this.
But I knew this opportunity you would
not dismiss.
Are you happy you made
me cry?
And now on you I can
no longer rely.
Anyhow, one fact is
still true.
The reason my breath is gone
is you.
Yup
Comments
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Nice beginning, and you nailed the ending. Great job.
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Wow... this is a really good poem. I think the rhyming is awesome - I usually don't like rhyme, but this piece definitely made it work Very good emotion, too.
~Paradox
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