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Grams

 

 

 

she sat in her Sunday best
watching the dust glisten,
given life in coloured rays
by the warm evening sun

the angels have been busy’, she thought

 ... ‘or was it fairies?’
it really didn’t matter -
the sight was bewitching


she never sat in the front pew,
a priest had frightened her
as she sat directly in his gaze
told her she would go to Hell

she was only four years old
and innocent!



now she waits,
the chapel is cool and quiet,
she wonders when the choir will arrive
then she’ll see Charlie

blonde hair, green eyes,
sixteen, tall and so handsome


she was content
just to sit and wait


“C’mom, let’s get you home”,

her grandson helped her up



she smiled at the handsome young man,
he has Charlie’s eyes’, she thought
and patted his cheek.

“Oh Grams”, he chuckled.

she slipped her arm through his
and they strolled off
down the street.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • csmmoms2
    March 26
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    My grandfather was a Charlie too...a very fine poem. -c


  • hawkeslake gold member
    March 26

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    First I thought of my mother, who had secrets of her own, and would sometimes gaze off into the distance, and then I thought of myself (LOL!) This is a great story, very delicately drawn, with so much of it taking place in the mind -- where we have some of our greatest adventures... I truly enjoyed this, Sue!


  • arafura gold member
    March 26
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    Beautifully penned. Delicate as lace!

  • Nicely told Sis, you have a way of capturing real life and making it beautiful.

    Best of luck in the contest Suz

    love ya

    Jem xxxx


  • cricketjeff gold member
    March 26

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    Superb, such a touching tale, the writing is light and airy and the whole piece has just the right touch.

    Great stuff.



    Jeff


  • Amera gold member
    March 26

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    Wow! That’s not an AP “wow”, that’s a honest to goodness real “Wow”. I wish I had written this. I’ve seen elderly people sitting as if they were in a stupor before and to read this poem... shed an entirely new light on what I was seeing. This is the best poem I have ever read that explores the fantasy of the end of life.

    Love,
    Amera


  • grammabuff
    March 25
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    Great story. Thanks for entering.


  • breedluv gold member
    March 25
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    Oh, this is sweet. Wonderful free verse, Sue, and an uplifting story well told.

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