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Autumn Leaves

Autumn leaves, fire orange
swaying gently in the breeze
Back and forth, Back and forth
knowing nought where they land


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So many colors
looks like fire
in those tall trees
riding in the breeze
falling slowly to the ground

so what do you people think i like it but i ask for all comments

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