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Nightmare

One way out
No where to turn
Gotta get out
To get away from this nightmare

The air is heavy
I am weak
My knees bend
I fall to the concrete

I gasp for air untainted
Alais it is painted
with the evil that consumes me

Evil, darkness everywhere
what i see, what i feel
It is all around me

Somthing whispers
Somthing yells
I have to get out of this hell

In the back of my mind
I know i am fine
But i am slowy consumed by evil
Making me no longer real

Got to win
Got to fight
No way is there evil over light
I will win

But I am it
The last stand
Will i win?
Or will i disband?

Time passes
Minds break
I sucummed to evils make

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