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How Sweet, Now Marah

For Truth, I bow and drink New Wine,
no gorging fat or blood to waste;
and if for reason
there is prick or pain,
it's only from the Pierce of Wood
as morning comes again,
honey-rain deep and needful
past the first and bitter taste.

Author notes

"When they came to Marah, they could not drink its water because it was bitter.
(That is why the place is called Marah.) So the people grumbled against Moses, saying, “What are we to drink?”
Then Moses cried out to the Lord, and the Lord showed him
a piece of wood. He threw it into the water, and the water became sweet"
Exodus 15:22-25 NIV
Written March 1st, 2004

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  • welbis
    June 24, 2005
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    Ahah... thanks for explaining All makes sense now.

    You can turn on the filtering on your author settings page I think.

  • CookieZeal Greeters member
    June 24, 2005
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    I've just learned that there are certain words in here that are filtered for certain views. I don't know why it isn't on mine,....and I've asked a Moderator to check on it. Here is how it SHOULD read.
    "and if for reason
    there is p- r- i- c- k or pain," lol. Well. Glad there's some censoring even if it wasn't used correctly. Least they care.
  • welbis
    June 24, 2005
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    awesome. I came across this passage a few weeks ago in my devotionals... it's a powerful write; i felt God wash over me as a read it as it brought my thoughts on this passage back to the forefront of my mind

    The only criticism would be that 'bunny' feels a tiny bit out of place... but i write that more from being intrigued about what you were trying to achieve through it than through negativity!

    Thanks for your comments on my page, and i do play guitar!! I read your author page so 'level 2' would be fantastic whenever you do visit!

    In Christ and thanks!
    Edited on Jun 24, 7:59 because ''.

  • CookieZeal Greeters member
    March 1, 2004
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    Oh, Myra! You know that it was about 5 thousand years prior to the actual crucifixion where God used this symbolism of things to come to PROVE the Sacrifice of the Cross that made the difference. That it was His Cross that would save us eternally to heaven.

    I'm so glad we know. And I hope that the sweetness will be on your heart locally and in the time of 'now'!!!
    Thank you and love....CookieZeal/D

    Edited on Mar 05, 3:10 p.m. because ''.

  • myrataal silver member
    March 1, 2004
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    Wondrous &Divine

    Marah's Myrrh
    (for Dianne)

    I've had my fill
    of Marah's water

    its bitterness
    sweetened by His
    Cross - its pain

    soothed with His
    Myrrh

    myra
    02.03.2004

  • haikumonk gold member
    March 1, 2004
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    Interesting and educational as well. Nice work.

    Don

  • Jaden silver member
    March 1, 2004
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    Very nice, Cookie.
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