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My crosswalk

I stood in the rain, and blinked.

I said, "Do you know where the road ends?"
You said, "The road never ends."

The sky took a turn and you were gone.

I screamed as I begged you to tell me where the road ends.
You whispered, "The road never ends."

I asked if I'll see you again.

You stood in the rain, and blinked.
You said, "I'll be there before the road ends."

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ZC... where on earth do I go from here?

And why is your voice gone?

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