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You Said We’ll Always Be Friends No Matter What [2] (rewritten) (Depressed Angry Fucking Version!)

You said we’ll Always Be Friends No Matter What
I loved you so much and not just for what you got.
Not just for you have pretty boobs and they say you’re hot
I can’t believe what you promised and how you soon forgot.

My tears fall, you don’t talk at all
You never gave me a call.
You never dropped in a messages just saying “hi”
Nor you alerted me that this was goodbye.

Days, months & Years gone by, you never asked about me
It reminds me of you every time I jerk off and pee.
How was I such a fool to think that this was a never ending story ?
I doubt if I still occupy a tiniest part in your fucking memory.

Your love, your words, and this friendship was fake
I see it’s now him who’s feeding you a creamy chocolate cake
I came to know all you needed was my girly fucking cock
You’re done stroking my dick, now on this lonely road I walk.

Played with my prick, pulled down my pants took off my coat
Now you make him do the dirt and take off your skirt
This father fucking life I live feels no heaven
I can’t force you to come back when you won’t as I’m forgotten.


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By: Shuberth Dias
Email: shuberth@rediffmail.com

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Written: 26 March 2009 Thursday, 2:31:55 AM

T®uth of lie it$ up to you to de©ided, I’m not in ve®y good mood ®ight now, I don’t believe in people @nd ye I don’t believe they $@y @®e my @P p@l$ o® $o ©@lled f@ke p@l$, "if u need $omeone to t@lk ¥ou know I @m @lw@y$ the®e fo® you" "i ©@®e @bout you @nd i'll @lw@y$ be the®e fo® u no m@tte® wh@t" .... bl@h bl@h bl@h ! @nd then they @ll di$@ppe@®ed, I’m done!
I think it$ bette® not to t@lk @ll o® then get fu©ked my mind @g@in on©e @g@in, Thi$ i$ the fin@l ©h@pte® of my life, I don’t ©@®e,
Tell me if you found @ny e®®o®$ ©o$ I’m too l@zy too ®e@d b@©k @nd type

©u®®ently:
E@ting: nothing
Thinking: lot of thing$
W@t©hing: viewing thi$ fu©king I w®ote
Li$tening To: $hut The FU©K Up @nd D@n©e - DJ @lig@to® P®oje©t v$ Gigi D @go$tino

Rewritten by me
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Comments

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  • it good wow

  • Wow that is intense!

    So raw; I can really feel your anger and disappointment. I really kind of liked the refreshing and real metaphors that you used, like;



    "Days, months & Years gone by, you never asked about me
    It reminds me of you every time I jerk off and pee."



    You know, I have been really pissed off the last few days myself. I am sick of being Miss Nice. I could write some really angry stuff too. Maybe I would feel better. You have actually inspired me to do so. And, it would feel really cathartic to be crude. I would be sure to put a warning and place it under adult and angry. I am sick and tired of being DICKED over myself all my life too. God, does it ever end!!!!?


  • Pain Angel
    March 27

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    wow

    i am sad you feel this way... but you never know why people dont respond to your comments. i just havent had the time lately. good poem

  • LoveToLaugh07
    March 26

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    well, let me just say i know how you feel. i can't trust people any more either. they say that they will always be there, but then they leave. i am here if you want to talk, but you don't seem in the mood, but whenever you do you can just send me a message.


    • Shuberth
      March 26
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      ur right "they say that they will always be there, but then they leave"
      i also heard this alot of times when new people say "i am here if you want to talk" but then they leave too when needed to talk, they dont talk at all or never ask about.

      i'm so sorry dont take this wrong way, but i'm done and i try not to get into this fake people (i've not said u),

      they said they are friends but are they ????
      i'm just done and i dont b-live in people on here.

  • um wow.....uh.....nothing much to say after that.....

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