My energy is gone.
I call you-
You don’t come.
I let you go -
You come back.
I’m tired of that.
Surround you-
You don’t accept it.
Try to forget-
You appear again.
We run from love…
It has its rules,
Based on the connection
Of two close friends.
Become so fool…
Let me enjoy or
Erase from the mind –
Everything or nothing.
Let me deny…
It so hurt.
Imaginary kisses…
Imaginary hugs…
It should be stopped.
We’re not small kids,
Make our friendship
From disappointed love.
Author notes
quote:
4. Falling in love is awfully simple, but falling out of love is simply awful.
A contest entry
- Letting Go Feels Good. by Poetryintheblood.
700 points, ended May 20, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Thank you for your entry, good luck in my contest, Josie
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This speaks to so many situations in life where love is doomed for pairs who exist outside the box of rules. I like this write a lot.
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wow, wonderful or real, this is actually painful to read, but essential experience if one needs to and write about this rueful experience. wow, this is feeling beyond how feeling is, how disappointing it seems.., Tony
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this is a wonderful poem and you did a great job on it my favorite part is
We run from love…
It has its rules,
Based on the connection
Of two close friends.
Become so fool…
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Oh, this is a sad, sad poem. I like it, though. It was easy to read, & easy to understand. Even the deeper meaning wasn't hard to catch, Great write!
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Glad that you liked it.
Great to see you on my page again!
Hope not a last time.
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karina
I'm sorry I haven't been commenting much. Been pretty busy taking care of things. & no, my friend, this is very far from the last time you'll see me on here! -
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awsome right. it was very straight forward and i can also relate to it. very very nice !
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Read some more of my work.
You'll like it, I promice!
Thanks a lot for comment
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I like the sentiment, and I enjoyed the way in which it was written. The message is straightforward, and I can certainly relate. The first stanza is a wonderful intro. Good work!
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Thanks, I did my best
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Realy great I am used to the rhyming and I am new to that kind of writeing.
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Glad that you liked it, come back again!
Thanks for comment
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Beautifully penned great work.
good luck
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Thanks
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very nice write.
keep writing :]
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Thanks dear Ashley,
Come back anytime for reading more of my work.
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This was different, and I liked it that way. I like pieces that set themselves apart. This piece, at times, felt like it wasn't written in English first, but that could just be word-choice. Excellent write and good luck in my contest.
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This is really good. I only got confused on "I let you go -
You back." Did you mean 'you come back'? Well, anyway, this is really good. I like it. (=
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That's what I ment,
thanks.
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