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if silence is golden
then i am but a poor man
with you my poverty came
for silence i have none
never quiet inside
as my heart still whispers your name
whispers in my dreams, whispers in my thoughts
never left alone
silence i have not

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    April 19

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Interesting; I like how silence is expressed in this - quite a strong piece from within

    I really like it
    Keep Writing!
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  • Umi Juvariel
    March 25
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    This piece packed so much emotion into so few lines I felt sure it was going to burst. This poem was wonderfully written, and the message was clear. There was no hidden meaning here, your words were written on your sleeve. Excellent write and good luck in my contest.