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Something Nasty

You see an angel,
I see something nasty
disguised as something nice.

You see a girl,
I see a manipulative woman
who has lied to keep you.

You see what I want you to see,
not the truth kept hidden.

Author notes

prompt - "I only want you to see my favorite part of me, and not my ugly side."

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  • Malabu
    April 1

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    seems that's how it always is... love has it's own breath...
    we breathe it
    then it blows away


  • CrystalLizard
    March 26

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    Nice. Very succinct and well-written, yet the message is perfectly clear. I love the sense of manipulation/secret-keeping and feel sorry for the "you" of the piece.


  • log-home-guy-Nic
    March 25

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    I see

    you have told the bold truth within this write. I really like this very well articulated. Just clicken by Ian


  • The Reapers Angel
    March 25

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    Beautifully amazing.
    I love this a lot. thank you for your entry.
    ~Angel

  • City Rose
    March 25

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    Oooh. Wow. What am I seeing now? Talent? Yes. I truly believe you have that. Well done and all the best in the contest.


  • Scyphon
    March 25
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    A very interesting poem
    a write of such a sucubus
    well dont, good luck to you


  • Kathraina silver member
    March 25

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    WOW

    This is absolutely stunning! I loooove what you've done here. I can definitly relate to this. Ben is so kind and sees things in me I don't.
    Another masterpiece!!!

    ♥ Kate

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