So come and walk with me
Please come and talk with me
About how the future comes to soon
And then we’ll look up to the moon
That’s when we’ll decide
All the routes have been tried
And we’ll get so high
We’ll laugh and we’ll cry
Its when sweat comes in beads
And it’s the music that bleeds
That we’ve come way to far
We get back to the car
Drive to the edge
Across the ledge
Lets decide tonight
To give up on the fight
I’m walking on air
When its me and you there
But then it gets hazy
And I start to go crazy
When the sun’s shining through
And its me without you
I’m losing your face
I’m losing your taste
How do you do this to me
And you do it so easily
Its when sweat comes in beads
And it’s the music that bleeds
That we’ve come way to far
We get back to the car
Drive to the edge
Across the ledge
Lets decide tonight
To give up on the fight
I don’t have the strength left
For no more regret
We’re caught in this vice
Well you only live twice
So lets get up and run
We can walk in the sun
Just like we had planned
We’ll walk hand in hand
Right across the sand
Straight in the sea
Just you and me
Its when sweat comes in beads
And it’s the music that bleeds
That we’ve come way to far
We forget who we are
The is world is cold and lonely
When you’re your one and only
You need to fight for what’s right
You need to fight for every night
So come and walk with me
Please come and talk with me
Just come and walk with me
A contest entry
- I WANT ANYTHING! by Umi Juvariel.
4300 points, ended April 9, 369 entries
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Comments
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this was really really good idunno what u were talking about it being shitty it wasnt at all!
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The background was very fitting. This did feel like it had a hand-written, in a notebook or journal feel. This was indeed a great write, and other than a few missing 'too's, this was perfect. I love the relatable feeling you gave this piece. Excellent write and good luck in my contest.
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