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The Desire

The mention of your name
makes my eyes light up with flames
your love is what I desire
to touch your soul is my passion

Set a seal upon my lips
through all my days
your kiss leaves me starry-eyed
your love is what I desire

When your around
my smile beams through the clouds
my hand needs your touch
your love is what I desire.

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  • J Macabre gold member
    March 25

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    I love these kinds of writes about that one special someone who consumes your every thought, feeling, and desire.
    The heartfelt write.


  • Umi Juvariel
    March 25
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    This was short and simple, but lovely. There was an 'm' missing in the last stanza, but other than that, I enjoyed this piece. I feel this way every time my fiance and I kiss. This was a wonderful day brightener for me. Excellent write and good luck in my contest!