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I'm the one that should'nt of been

Dark forces break the light
clouded by darkness from a little one
I'm the one that should of never been born
I'm the one that shouldn't of been

Dark desires plague my ground
Empty obsessions play the night
I'm the only that should  of never been born
I'm the one that shouldn't of been





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  • passionate-poet
    March 25

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    ive felt like this before in life just felt like defeated. well said!
    thanks for sharing with the rest of us


  • Spiritual Poet gold member
    March 25

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    awwwwwwww

    I hope you arent really speaking of yourself. Of course you should have been. I believe everyone has a special place here. This is short but emotional. God bless you, Mark