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Kid Rock's American Badassness...
Godsmack's Philosophy...
Evanescence's Love...
Corases through my veins
Razor-blade tears prove my love
But the life from my wrists
Can't and wont awaken your damned soul!....
Unless...

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Written March 1st, 2004

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  • Embitter
    June 2, 2007

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    Meep. I do so enjoy some of the songs of those various artists, most notably Godsmack. I think you could've expanded on this idea and made a nice lengthy piece of musically inclined emotion. =)

    good though!

  • blueEYEScry
    May 2, 2005
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    its interesting...but i like it

  • hellsjustasauna
    November 13, 2004
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    woh...well im blown away...not literally..but if ur poem was a gust of wind then im quite certain id be heading towards the other side of the room by now


  • Empathy-eyes
    September 27, 2004
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    Good imagery, and I love how you listed a few bands at the beginning Well-wrote with deep emotional meaning. A nice cliff-hanger too. Pen on, Kate

  • Jade Darklinmoon
    August 10, 2004
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    talka bout deep? here you have it ladies and gents! i get this completely. it is hard to love someone and they dont see your feelings. well done


  • Trilliana
    May 7, 2004
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    oh... I was thinking of a title... think I got one for you... "Living in the Music"


  • Trilliana
    May 7, 2004
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    I love this... the artists you used is great, shows slight differences in each of the styles... Wonderful job *turns up her Evanescence CD*


  • FallingDeep
    April 20, 2004
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    wow, this is really good. i could really relate.
    Love always,
    Danae

  • HoldMe
    March 30, 2004
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    Evanessence rules, haven't heard much of Kid Rock, heard of Godmsack...but definitely an interesting piece

  • Tomoso
    March 23, 2004
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    well i love evanesence too. other bands? never heard of em. how embarising. but im not american, maybe that makes it better?
    good write.


  • Cocoa Bubbles
    March 8, 2004
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    Nice I like that. Not sure that I really get it, but I like it none the less. Nice colors too And great bands

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