Kid Rock's American Badassness...
Godsmack's Philosophy...
Evanescence's Love...
Corases through my veins
Razor-blade tears prove my love
But the life from my wrists
Can't and wont awaken your damned soul!....
Unless...
Author notes
Written March 1st, 2004
What did you think
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Meep. I do so enjoy some of the songs of those various artists, most notably Godsmack. I think you could've expanded on this idea and made a nice lengthy piece of musically inclined emotion. =)
good though!
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its interesting...but i like it
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woh...well im blown away...not literally..but if ur poem was a gust of wind then im quite certain id be heading towards the other side of the room by now
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Good imagery, and I love how you listed a few bands at the beginning
Well-wrote with deep emotional meaning. A nice cliff-hanger too. Pen on, Kate
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talka bout deep? here you have it ladies and gents! i get this completely. it is hard to love someone and they dont see your feelings. well done
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oh... I was thinking of a title... think I got one for you... "Living in the Music"
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I love this... the artists you used is great, shows slight differences in each of the styles... Wonderful job *turns up her Evanescence CD*
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wow, this is really good. i could really relate.
Love always,
Danae -
Evanessence rules, haven't heard much of Kid Rock, heard of Godmsack...but definitely an interesting piece
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well i love evanesence too. other bands? never heard of em. how embarising. but im not american, maybe that makes it better?
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Nice
I like that. Not sure that I really get it, but I like it none the less. Nice colors too
And great bands
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