I am walking with you
under the night sky
hand in hand
you and I
as we are
kissing in the rain
lips connected so tight
my heart feels so right
your face is a gorgeous sight
what I say to you
is very much true
with you I am never blue
I am walking with you
under the night sky
hand in hand
you and I
as we are
kissing in the rain
when you kiss me
it makes me beg please
show me how love should be,
we are in the rain
your kiss is what my lips will gain
it will wash away my pain,
I am walking with you
under the night sky
hand in hand
you and I
as we are
kissing in the rain
come on and kiss me
kiss me in the rain.
Author notes
I am romantic
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Comments
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This is a very wonderful love poem revolving around rain. I love the rain. There's nothing more passionate to kiss under.
I wish you all the best with this piece. Nice rhyme scheme. 
Good luck.
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Awww it's so wonderfult o have love. This poem has given you 15 points. you have a total of 77 points. I thank you so much for entering the contest and best of luck to you. kahy
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Love the cresent shape of the repeated verses. Very nice form. Thanks for this great entry.
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Very nice.
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That was great. Went very well with the picture.
You are pretty good at writing these kinds of poems.
Keep it up.
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