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climbing [haiku]




there is a single
droplet of water climbing
up the waterfall

A contest entry

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  • Fabio Sardi silver member
    April 10
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    Wonderful job! I really like it!

  • Awesome! This should had taken the gold!

  • Aw, damn! I love the thought of a droplet trying to climb back up, to get back home. Freakin' brilliant!

    Giving personification to water, emotion to it. I'm floored and you are a finalist!

    If you add the picture from the contest into the poem, kiwigirljacks will approve it too.

    If you don't know how to add a picture, ask a moderator. It's easy.

    This is money!

    Thank you, Gresham

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