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Arrival day

Arrived in the world sixteen years back
Not wanting or hoping,just here
Parental guidance to lead you on the right track
But with age and lifes troubles,comes worry and fear

Happy birthday to you,its two thousand and nine
At sixteen mere years,the worlds at your feet
So I will send you love,to your heart from mine
The one line of advice is,be pleasant and sweet

Do not feel compelled to follow the gang
Stay true to yourself,the way life began
Cruel blows will be dealt,your heart will twang
Its time to flourish,you are a special young man.

Greetings to you,many happy returns
Move through your journey,go where you may
At every hurdles,pain stings and burns
But dear Brandon,enjoy your birthday.

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  • Awe, this is a really sweet birthday wish I loved it thanks so much for this beautiful piece


    • cazzy71
      March 28
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      Brandons poem

      So glad you liked it,it is always tricky knowing how my work will be taken.Thanks for reading it and giving feed back.


  • Maxboy gold member
    March 25
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    A very sweet birthday wish, well done.

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