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**Baby Names**

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Autumn Rain and Summer Sky
how the years are passing by
I cant give the world to you
but i will try....
My Autumn Rain and Summer Sky.
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Winter Rose and Crimson Spring
Oh what joy you both shall bring
When I am with you
I want to sing.................
Winter Rose and Crimson Spring.

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Adrian Remora and Jaden Victoria
when I look into your little eyes
I get such a feeling of euphoria
my beautiful baby girls
Adrian Remora and Jaden Victoria.

Author notes

This was a contest entry and I just Love these names. The first three,Autumn Rain and Summer Sky and Winter Rose are actually my friends names. Crimson Spring is what my babies name will be. Seriously...Isnt that Awesome? Anyways i thought these names were beautiful and I hope you do too...Good luck with naming your baby girls and Congratulations!! Not really my best "poem" but i did what I could.

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  • Great job.

  • what beautiful names. this was definitely a great dedication to your friends as well. I love the names and the way you wrote the poem. Thank you for entering and the best of luck. Kahy


  • guardianhost gold member
    March 25
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    What a refreshing poem

    Adrian Remora and Jaden Victoria
    when I look into your little eyes
    I get such a feeling of euphoria
    my beautiful baby girls
    Adrian Remora and Jaden Victoria.
    This was a great read. well done.
    Thank you for entering my contest .
    All the best in the contest.


  • k.a.s.s.i.e
    March 25

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    those are beautiful names. i've never heard of Crimson Spring as a name before, but it's cool. wish it were my name! nice poem, good luck in the contest.

    kAsSiE


  • Aelten
    March 25

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    I love these names and especially how you have set them to poetry, just lovely My personal favorite would be Autumn Rain (Rayne)
    Thanks for sharing this
    Khia


  • individuality gold member
    March 25

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    smiling poetry that celebrates life, the seasons are an inspiration, they bathe us in sunshine, caress us with winds, show us colour and rest with white flakes of beauty. good pieces.

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