I dont know how deep our friendship is
I dont know why so much I miss
your company and laughter.
But at this moment and after
maybe there will be a time when I will think
as every tear goes down a wink,
that it must have been a great compassion
to write about us,a valediction.
I remember the first day in the French class
a new girl I was among the mass.
But it was such a wonderful discovery
to get a friend among many.
I dont actually remember how our friendship grew
to become this strong,compatible and true.
I dont know why I am writing this,
my fingers just move on its wish.
Its just some lines in random
but it is a situation 'a seldom'.
You had been there always
In all the life's toiling highways.
You nursed me through thick and thin
when I was suffering for my sins.
Now its six years of our acquaintance,
never knew that we would reach this instance.
The dice has rolled again in our destiny
it may not mean a thing to any.
Will it lead to a ladder or a snake
or consume everyrhing in its wake?
But I know our friendship is cemented to the core,
physical distance wont turn it sore.
I dont feel any bindings with you,
the way I feel with nobody its true.
Why you mean so much to me I dont know
but there are things so immaculate that dont show.
They can be only felt and thats what is here to stay,
its something very difficult to describe by mere say.
But there is a fear so great inside,
the friendship may wash away in time's tide.
Hope we would not meet like two strangers
as the years goes to linger.
And one fine day when we meet,
we would be even better mixture of concrete
of old love,merry,faith abound in our eyes
and not to loose it in the nature's guise.
I want the time to stop and remain the same.
Stop at every impish moment in our games.
Stop at every pranks we might have played.
Stop at every rumbles of joy when it rained.
Stop at every prickle of pain our heart shed.
Stop at every goodnight messages before we went to bed.
Stop at every little disagreement we shared.
Stop at every moment when for me you cared.
I want to feel the impact altogether to emnate,
the latent feel of it all,so the world can relate,
the symbiosis of our eternal friendship.
I had written this for my batchmate Tania when I was leaving my state for another to pursue my higher education after 12th std.She is a very close friend to me.
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Beautiful
Truly, you understand as I do that there is a power in good friendship that distance, time, obstacles of any nature, cannot stop. It is strength and energy and an odd calm with merely the thought of such people in your life.
Way to go with this one. Way to go. And I hope the power I aforementioned prevails yet again. I'm sure it will.
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You truly conveyed the depth and feeling of that unique closeness of eternal friends here. Well done.
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This is beautiful. I really like the ending how you repeat "Stop at" over and over in the last stanza.
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I like the concrete images throughout the poem—cement is a really nice metaphor for the bond of friendship. Really great friends are hard to find; hopefully the two of you will remain close. Thanks so much for sharing.
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nice tribute. good job at rhyme too. thank you for adding.
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Excellent Read!
You put lots of love in this one. Keep writing great poet! KJC
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there is no word for how beautiful this poem is
i am really shocked
i wish i had a friend like this
its so beautiful i am sure she is very pleased with what u hv written
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