Hey you,
we've known each other for so long. We're so close.
I see us writhing, twisting, grasping to life; we love like an explosion;
you know me,
you're mine,
you're my everything.
You know more about me than anyone else, and yet there are still so many things that you don't know. Things I ache to tell you.
I burn with fear that if you found out you'd leave me, hate me, pity me. That you'd change towards me. I love you, you, you.
Baby you're my heartbreakbeat - you're my rain, river and ocean. I burn to tell you my secret because then you'll have all of me and I'll be home. But these are things I'll never say - because I love you.
A contest entry
- I want to tell you everything [but I'm not brave enough] by Noir mariposa...x.
1400 points, ended May 12, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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im so happs i remember my info, haha!
granted i dont have muse so im not going to be writing for a bit but haha!
love your poem, so good.
much different from the stuff youused to write, we were such emo's!
now were super cool!
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Thankyou
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I was going to ask if you could write what that secret is, but then I thought the better of it.
". But these are things I'll never say - because I love you."
That line, just got me.
Perhaps because I relate to it.
Because I can sit there and go, yes;
I do exactly the same thing.
Well written and heartfelt write.
Thank you for penning it out.
Claire x
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