you draw me out
reflections mirrored and enhanced
completing each other
our needs sublimely fulfilled
by each others existence
Author notes
picture swans butterflies
contemporary tanks
A contest entry
- MAKING LOVE by Swan song.
700 points, ended April 17, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
this is a work in progress,constructive comments
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excellent
This reads so soft and beautiful
Hugs
Your sis
Susan~~~
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my you found my favorit pieces now I can read them again too, thank sis
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very nice piece keep the coming. it is nice to read you.
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Oh my..a masterpiece and quite possibly the best thing I've ever read! *bows* well done once again.
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my humble thanks
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very good take on the photo short adn sweet but effective I think.
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ah shucks
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A very nice piece that it creative and impacting. You given it even more depth by the pic above it. Wonderful meanings and imagery here.
AsIThink...
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ah my humble thanks
i am happy you enjoyed this
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I like the composition of the piece as well as the design of the page. Very pleasing to the eye. I can see that you understand the usage of color.
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my humble thanks and a grin
I should be painting , but all I seem to want to do is write, addiction to words adn emotions , thank you
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What a feeling to have. I miss that very much.
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my humble thanks
tis a joyful rush, that sometimes bears an ill wind, this time I hope not
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There is an innocence in reflection here. Very soft and lovely. ~Pamela
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my humble thanks
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Beauty draws the finest of lines that bring this image to sensual satisfaction
best wishes and good luck
Julie
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my humble thanks
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Perfect poem, perfect pic!
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Grin
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