Alienated,
Yet inclusion raises love,
Alienate me.
Author notes
The opposite (to be honest) of what I'm thinking... I suppose I wish I could be detached from certain situations, yet cannot because of my feelings for the people involved.
A contest entry
- Haiku ~ semi-quickie by thejollytinker.
1200 points, ended March 31, 18 entries
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It is difficult- we carry our souls like heavy suitcases through an airport.
Wonderful expression!
Thank you, Gresham
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Thanks very much! Yeah, it's so true... sometimes, we all just want to not have to care about anybody!
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