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crocus in full bloom

crocus in full bloom
ornament the warming ground
black bear awakens

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A contest entry

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  • tarcus
    April 7

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    haiku. Not something I am a great lover of.
    The main problem I have with this piece is the repetition of the title in the first line or is it the other way around?
    Why not use a more simplistic yet more descriptive title such as...
    SPRING.


  • deadcolor dreams
    April 6

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    This is a great haiku, thanks for the great entry and good luck to you. A well deserved silver here.


  • thejollytinker
    March 31
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    That's old school! Can't tell you how much I enjoyed this!

    Thank you, Gresham

  • Bad Bill
    March 26
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    You conjure up a lovely vision of renewal and the cycle of nature - very well done.

    Bill