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Isn't it amazing

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Isn’t it amazing, our
shared bookmarks of life?

meandering heart prints
giving insight in written word
to fragments of who we are-
or dream of being.

Those aspirations that flow
from one soul to another,
held close to commune with
time and time again.

Isn’t it amazing
the friendships made?
Special, cinnamon flavoured
adding spice and texture
to our world,

a cornucopia of plenty
sailing on emotions tide.
Yes, isn’t it amazing!

 

 

 

 

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Happy four years of sharing!

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  • sgking123 silver member
    November 6
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    wow

    imagery was a strong point of this super poem...I cordially invteyou over to my page and see the latest three i have

  • Beautiful

    Well this is just an absolutely amazing write and I really like how this poem was penned. it has such marvelous depth and beauty atoned through out it that really sucks one in anyways on a small note congratulations to the contest holder on 4 years any ways getting back to the poem I really love how this flowed and how it just really sucked me in and ensnared me with its marvelous beauty. any ways a brilliant write and keep up the good work & good luck with the contest.