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Squeaky Swings and Tall Grass

Paint amputates from rusted metal coils,
as limber weeds reach for absent limbs.
Remembrance twines in beaming rays.
Squeaky swings hum their howling tune
as the wind lingers on bruised wood.

It has been some time since I have been here.
Sweet memories now swallow me in blue analects.
Squeaky swings and tall grass,
the longest shadows ever cast.

Author notes

Xx Luna xX: Leoné Watkins

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  • loveisfreedom
    April 12
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    very cool

    i liked it good one very discriptive


  • Madison Mary
    March 26
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    Absolutely beautiful; I love the way you played with the words in this piece.