for you i will cross the deepest ocean
for you i will have the deepest devotion
your everything you mean the world to me
you keep me dry in the rain
you know just how to stop the pain
i dont know what id do without you in my life
i really just want to be your wife
but before i leave i want you to know
i love you and i wont let go
i love you baby
Author notes
im just happy cus its so real
i love him
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beautiful piece! such a heartfelt and loving motion within words. you two are lucky to have each other. love is a wonderful blessing, isn't it? i love my man too. he, like your man, means a lot to me and does a lot for my mentality. even though he's a pain in my butt sometimes, he's a great guy...lol! so very glad that you have someone that touches your heart and your life with the simplest of things. keep on writing! this is a great write! i'm sure he knows just how much you love him. although it always is a great plus to make sure he knows every now and then.
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I think out of all the poems i've read this is honestly my more favorite. I used to feel this way about someone.. and I hope I find someone else to feel this way. great job
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very nice work i feel the same way about the one i love he is the only one i want to be with and i dont plan to get married but if i do get married it will be to him. i would do anything for him great write and keep it up i hope the one you love like this knows and loves you back you cant find people like you in this world anymore so keep that one close and love him dear....
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this is very sweet and to the point. those are the best kind of poems to read. bc in those few words or lines you can feel all the emotions from the heart
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I'm happy for u that u found that. Also this is a very good write. Mcl and keep it wicked!!
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