The stars themselves
Grotesque in comparison
The moon Hides it's face
In utter embarrassment
The shine of the sun
Dull next to you
You're simply astounding
..If only you knew
You take my breath away
With just your beauty smiling
I look into your eyes
and see the galaxy crying
The rivers and the oceans
are empty and flaccid
You make all that's pleasure
Seem like a shower of acid
For nothing comes close
To your beauty or compassion
Your gracefulness
Is a word without action
No one in existence
belongs within your presence
Beauty, simply nothing less
Than undefined perfection
You're a candle in a cave
A rose among the weeds
You're the very reason that
My soul begins to sing
The letters to my poetry
The lyrics to my songs
You are the only reason
I feel like I belong
Nothing in the universe
compares to just your presence
You are the beating in my heart
You are my very essence
The essence in my soul
You simply leave me breathless
You are the muse to all my blessings
You're an absolute goddess
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest~! by xxFallen Dreamsxx.
475 points, ended April 22, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Love by Abstract Image.
400 points, ended May 11, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - My 50th contest!!!! by Night Terrors.
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• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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omg i love this. this was absolutely beautiful and i love you just for writing this lol...GL
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oh i love this. its so sweet and tender... the passion you show is astounding!
thank you for this lovely read, and good luck in the contest
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Did you have someone in mind when you wrote this?
if they havne't seen it already, they should. It's very powerful
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