Unforgiving raindrops beat down;
like steel, it cut through skin
passing only one question between -
'What did love do to me?'
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie For Those Still Awake. by Cerulean Sunrise.
450 points, ended March 25, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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A.M.A.Z.I.N.G ((((:
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beautiul.. simple and perfect
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I love the sucient motions in which you wrote this. Consice, yet still speaking so much pain.
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wonderful
Hello Sweet Soul,
You have penned here a most wonderful write.
You have provided the reader with visuals and heartfelt emotions.
One could 'see' and 'feel' what you were writting about,
and to me, that tells me it is a great poem, I like to be able to 'see'
and 'feel' what the writer is penning about, and you have done just this.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us, and I wish you well
in the contest with much love and happiness.
Your friend in poetry,
~Angel-anne~
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aww sometimes i wonder that myself
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