Master's coming;
Bark now, no, now!
Yes, happy, excited,
Open the cage, yes!
Oh, food time is it!
Wow, food!
Yum yum
Oh, ummm
The door is open?
Run! Let's run!
Where's master!
Oh just run! Let's run!
Quick catch it, it moves!
Get it, come on, let's go!
Run run run run!
Puffed, tired, didn't get it, stop.
Where did it go?
Drink!
Ahh nice and cool.
Master! Hello!
I am really happy! Lets go for a run!
Yes, cmon lets go!
Funny noises? Wierd!
Hey, what's that thing!
Chase! Catch! So exciting!
Gee I need a rest.
Where is master?
Quick, master is calling!
Lets go!
Hi!
What now? Hear that noise?
More noise!
Yes run run!
Follow master!
(Cage door closes) Fun fun fun fun fun!
Ahh, puffed need a drink.
Where did master go?
Oh, there is food here!
Hey, I want to run over there!
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Master?
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- Inside A Dog's Mind by Sprite.
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LOL, the mind of a dog. I never really thought of it this way, but now.....hahah, I bet they do have quick thoughts.
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Thanks for entering!
This sounds like what my Cairn is thinking. She can run in two directions at once. Is this your dog or another dog?
The flow could be improved upon, but this certainly does convey a certain type of thinking. You did do a wonderful job of writing this from the dog's head.
~ Joyce
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HAHAHAHAHAHA I love this so much connection with the experience of being cannine it's almost troubling. Your pace through out keeps the reader drawn in and feeling excited and tired along with the cutie doggies LOL this is ace!!
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aawww the bit at the end...
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