Never Say Never (This is what I do)
Wow,
(dude) old man...
I sent that message
along time ago...
almost once upon a time ago, long ago,
but it has been so long since i 'writ' script...
I have been away from myself...
I have been many miles away from what I know as myself...
I use to rite script everyday...
Poetry on this site was my journel...
It was very personal to me and I took it
PER-SON-AL-LY
when no one read...
ME
but that was back in the day when I wrote script...
lol, bbf, omglmfao, and ect...
I always used elipsis as my thing...
or dot dot dot... <~~~ that there...
pointing at the ~~~> ...
the thing that's before the west pointing <~~~ <~~~THAT THERE
(up,up,up)
(and one below here)
...
Well Now I am Older And Every Word In a Sentance Is Important
Unless the Word Is
an, yet, or, is, this and that, or, uhhh
I is the Most Important...
PLEASE !!!
WHEN YOU
OR
WHEN YOU DONT...
USE CAPITAL LETTERS.
ALWAYS MAKE I CAPITAL,
MAKE US CAPITAL,
PUT AN APOSTROPHY IN DONT,
and...
NEVER SAY 'AND'
or
don't
or
I
...uhhh...
US
(us or United States)
and...
But,
like I was saying,
I am much older now
and I may have had many some birthdays
since then.
I am 25-years-old
as of Monday, the twenty-fifth of March this year.
This is the first year
I have actually felt older.
Its more invigerationg than I thought and
I don't really know how
to truthfully feel about it.
Never say never
This is true
Never say never
when you are blue, or sad
or sick and tired
of being sick and tired
of Everclear
of Heroin
of CRACK
or even of
DOING NOTHING AT ALL (about it?)!
Never
Say
Never
(We mean it)
(Never)
(Doing)
(Anything)
(About)
(It)!
Never
Say
Never
about any of it!
Life
Is
BULLSHIT!
...yet it has a pleasant smell
about it.
Never Say Never
(This is what I do)
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Amazing!
Amazing.
I can imagine you in a room Slamming this against walls. Voice so loud and low in places to make others understand your points. Amazing.
I too will hit 25 this year.
june 17th.
My anticipation is my downfall. I'm scared really.
How does it feel?
Amazing write. You make me happy to be joining poets again.
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The fourth stanza made me smile with your description of the ellipsis.... I also love the line "I have been away from myself." I like your use of parenthesis and contradictions, too. Life is full of both, of course. (Personally, I like life, even with its twists and turns and body-slams into brick walls.) I’m looking forward to reading more of your work. And happy birthday.
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Happy------>birthday. Keep writing. I don't like punctuation in poetry, but found this amusing.
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well, ill applaud for you.
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Why can't I applaud my own work? Oh, and I would like to thank, Sidewinder for giving me the reply box to write in. Without his innitial comment this would not have been possible.
Thank you and good-bye,
Doug -
yeah that sounds metal to me... I wrote it today... one day after my twenty-fifth birthday...
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