I ne'er saw a cloud
so high up in the sky
which sang a siren song
for one such as I
framed golden goodness
softly cradled serene
fragrance enticing eyes
in beauty that I have seen
within the solemn gaze
storms inside collide
upon the kiss of lavender
into a journey I will ride
across souls great distance
to gently breath a sigh
in you I touch tomorrow
for one such as I
Author notes
image prompt - Pic Credit-Love Me by autumnights
A contest entry
- PIF/Quickie by Carolina Moon.
700 points, ended March 25, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Prewrite Contest III by T.o.r.t.u.r.e..
700 points, ended May 18, 126 entries
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very great imagery. thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.
"I ne'er saw a cloud
so high up in the sky
which sang a siren song
for one such as I
framed golden goodness
softly cradled serene
fragrance enticing eyes
in beauty that I have seen"
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Wow... splendid!
So many beautiful
thoughts and imagery
Thanks for entering & best of luck -
what can i say that hasnt been said already -- not much dear but the imagery speaks to the mind and the heart with an exceptional visionary. the beauty in your words send the heart into saying awe but it also sends a tear to my eyes. well done and many blessings always xxxx
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One word: Magnificent.
Good luck. -
Beautiful flow of the unforced rhyming verse---
Well-Deserving of the Gold Award--
Well Done & Congratulations!
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Wow! What a great job you did on this one! You really did a wonderful job on this one!
Congrats on the Gold!!!
and love
Nyetta
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Beautiful words..wonderful rhythm. I loved it all,especially the last stanza as it makes the heart sigh. Great work!
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Beautifully done...soft and gentle. Flows from ones tongue as a gentle kiss. Well done...and best of luck in the contest.
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