As I wipe my eyes and walk away
My brokeness tells you I love you
Yet I still walk away
You put me down all those times yet I always stayed
Now I got to do this my way
I walk away trying to hide my tears
Yet still they flow thinking of the past year
Walking down the halls holding hands
You know kisses we would sneak
We were the best couple there could be
Now I walk away with tears in my eyes
But confidence in my heart
I know I can leave this time
And if anyone asks me
Ima say I'm doing just fine
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message conveyed, great write.
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I liked how you kept repeating "I walk away". It convayed that you really were confident in your decission. I also liked " nowi walk away with tears in my eyes but confidence in my heart" Power word that i think many can relate to, great jod.
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I like the strong sure voice of the narration—the "confidence in my heart." Breaking up is tough, but personally I've always found it's easier when you're the first to let go. I also like the phrase at the beginning "My brokeness tells you I love you."
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very nice write. sometimes walking away is the hardest part, but can be the best.
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"Now I walk away with tears in my eyes
But confidence in my heart
I know I can leave this time
And if anyone asks me
Ima say I'm doing just fine"
gReAt JoB!!LuVd It!!
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