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Better Than Reality

I looked for you.
Through and through,
To find an empty space.
I believe in you.
You're better than reality.

The night burned
Its brighter than expected
Not in pain but despair.
I woke dreaming of nothing specail
Today's the day when you become,
Better than reality.

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