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Hurts

It hurts inside,
to know how much time I spent
longing for your presense

How much you meant to me
how much I felt for you

But now I know the truth
the whole truth
and nothing but the truth.

And guess what?
The truth
just
simply
hurts.

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  • liduen silver member
    March 25

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    Oooohhhh I LOVE this!!!!! The last stanza is genious. I love the repetition of "truth"

    YAY! KT!


  • Tqop
    March 24

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    Brilliantly Done:

    Very beautiful, and deep. I love this. I love the title, and I like the background. It fits. I love how it starts off. And it really takes you a lot of places. Slamp junk. You are awesome.

    I'm a fan.

    Evemauy