Your quiet, reserved - have trouble saying how you feel
which is making it quite difficult for I
to see if the moments between us have been real
Its been some time, since I have found interest in another
there are, at times - moments I feel I shouldn't bother
Althought I could save myeslf the worry
and maybe you the grief
if I didn't let it get to me, and turned the other cheek
A mystery to I, and even those close by
Im not quite sure why it is
I want no other guy
Your in no rush to hold me
my kisses do not linger on your lips
and somehow still I manage to daydream
of being snuggled in your tight grip
I make no sense to dwell on you
as you go about your life
my every thought surrounds you
and it cuts me like a knife
So please don't be sorry
just show me that you care
im not asking for a miracle
just awknowledge that I'm there....
A contest entry
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Nicely done. Thanks for your entry and happy trails.
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Magical, you envoked my memories and my mind from the first stanza. You have more power in the imagery of this then i read in sometime 3 or 4 others together.
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Aww well now that's sweet of you to say! ( : This is a current emotional issue I seem to be dealing with, and I am glad to see that others can relate!!
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Something I have learned through my struggles, as you probably know already, there is always someone that understands and relates, and i hope truely and dearly that you can come out the other side shining a smile to blind for a mile.
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funnily enough I just commented on my facebook, that heartache calls for a good story ( :
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too true, m'lady, too true.
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