Stolen from her husband
and raped by God:
chattel to the
Divine Will.
This is my body
which was broken for you.
This is my blood
which was spilled for you.
Take now,
in remembrance.
And when you find
blood on the palms
of Mother Mary,
you'll know her sacrifice.
Author notes
Prompt: Picture #1
http://prismes.deviantart.com/art/moon-s-bride-II-87960932
A contest entry
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Very very interesting (and well written)! A genuinely original take.
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Thank you.
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wow that was very intense and the imagery was great. very interesting write and a great take on the prompt. i loved it
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Holy heck ... that's some write! Love the anti-theme of this (even though I am religious.. I guess lol), I love thought-provoking writes like this!
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Thank you! I'm always nervous posting something like this because I have the horrible luck of running into people who berate me for displaying a different opinion. I just try to be cautious.
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This is amazing. Ave Maria is a song that has such importance in our family. Well done. Good luck
Mariana
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beautiful take on the prompt! Truly amazing! I absolutely loved this write! You did a wonderful job with it! good luck in this contest!
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Trippin'dicular! This is so fascinating and controversial; it makes for a good write. I will bookmark this to study how it works so well. Peace.
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Thank you.
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