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Nightmare

I sit...and...I stare...and I wonder...where is HERE

Why do these things that appear...seem to SCARE?

This sound that I hear...omg make it stop...it’s too much to BEAR

My heart it beats faster...every beat it seems...closer to explosion I FEAR

The whole area is dark...pitch black...like stormy nights...my eyes begin to TEAR

Starving my insides are...rats or mice pick at my flesh...ahhhhh all the cupboards are BARE

Who could have done this...why would they do this...what have I done...to deserve this DESPAIR

Are my eyes now opened or closed...I cannot tell everything is just plain...I stay still and just STARE

What’s happened to my body...it feels so icky...I dread to touch my head...omfg I have no HAIR

Oh "person" who is all high...I dear not say your name...it makes me sick in my membrane, are you THERE?

ahhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhhhh ahhhhhhhhhhh...I scream does anyone HEAR

I try to get up and walk...maybe I can find a way out...I touch but there are no walls ANYWHERE

The ground beneath me is wet and moist...I feel pickers sticking my feet...I am nowhere, yes NOWHERE

I feel cold...my body shivers...goosebumps arise; I touch my skin...and realize I am BARE

The earth beneath me starts to shake...I run omg it’s an earthquake...I must escape this sadistic LAIR

I hear laughter...it shivers me with fear...the laugher is so loud and scary...I begin to SWEAR

I curse the laugher...curse it without holding anything back...I then realize the laughter is very NEAR

I think it’s coming from inside my brain...omg this is too much for me...I fall and pour floods of TEARS

Then the earth beneath me splits open...and I can finally see...dear - (pauses.....) - I scream..."oh screw it...'god'...please APPEAR"

I see beneath me...a bloody lava filled sea...this cannot be my faith...what did I do for this...sorry...sorry...do u HEAR

I fall into the burning earth...my skin burns and rips apart...and I suddenly at that moment...wake-up,

I am sitting...and...staring...wondering...where is here...hmmm familiar this seems...and then I realize....

NOOOnnnnOOOOOnnnnNNNNoooOOOnnnNNNNooooNoONonOno...............................................................I am trapped in a never-ending NIGHTMARE...

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  • looneyeclipse
    March 31

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    dreams are better

    I wish, I wish, I wish I had fries with that
    but then again, they would be denied by a bureaucrat
    pour on the ketchup, pour on the salt
    I went for a cruise with a hottie Texan... in my Cobalt


    • randygoku
      April 11
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      lol i wish i wish i could fly across the sky while eating apple pie and yelling hey get out of the way - hip hip hoooooorayyyyyyyy, then i land on a train and wave my arms like a plane, while i dance in the rain......hahaha


  • lovingpoet
    March 28
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    now that I got some points thaought you would love some and good luck


  • lovingpoet
    March 24
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    good write keep up the writing thank you for entering the contest

    • randygoku
      April 11
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      hey

      oh i wanted to know what did you think of the poem - never again i know you liked nightmare but wondering what did you think of never agian?

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