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Smarter Sensationalism

Is there a reason
for all the lost causes,
and all the reasons to just give up
and realize there's more to life than this?

Something worthy of focusing on;
lurking in a dark alley
eyes gleam guilty, out for blood.

A touch of newfounded light
cleaning the heart soul body mind spirit
for the biggest epiphany in the learning life.

Figure me this,
What kind of twisted, broken, struggling
advocate of existence might I be for the cause of
resistance?

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