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Spring Sun.




Spring sun
tree tops water
their roots





Andrew Hide
01~03~2004

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The snow melts

First published in Simply Haiku September 2004
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Written March 1st, 2004

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  • braincake
    March 3, 2004
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    Another great one... Your haiku are far superior to mine. I grew up in a northern climate, so this brought memories of home. Thanks!


  • Lurie
    March 2, 2004
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    Andrew!! I love spring so much!!! Our snow is melting and temps are rising!!!! I can't wait for Spring in full bloom!!! Beautifull images you leave me with!!!! Thank you for this warmth in the cold of winter. ~Laura


  • BillS2
    March 1, 2004
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    Hi Andrew:
    This is a very good write, with all that needs to be said. I won't clutter your page with excess and the Haiku speaks for itself. Thanks. Bill


  • haikumonk gold member
    March 1, 2004
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    wow.... you have compressed this one to the very end...!!! lol and it works dandy.....

    many blessings

    Don

  • Billbard silver member
    March 1, 2004
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    Andrew.Nice word picture.I can also visualize tcicles melting and dripping and gkistenng like diamonds in the spring sun.Not here .Our lowest temperature this winter was 40,right now it is close to 80.I do not miss the ice and the snow.Bill


  • Nam
    March 1, 2004
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    You know, off of first glance/read of this piece, it is just short and 'stout'. It doesn't really say much but at the same time it says a lot more than one thinks.

    This gave off an image right off for me. A great piece.



  • SusanL
    March 1, 2004
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    Yep thats is exactly what it does...


  • Emmerson
    March 1, 2004
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    You little nature lover, you. Spring is such a beautiful time of year, I was born in spring and it is definately my most favourite time of the year. I have never seen it melt snow, but I can imagine that, that would be a sight to see.

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