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Gently Waking.




river bank--
bluebells sway silently
gently waking Spring





Andrew Hide
01~03~2004

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Written March 1st, 2004

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  • Lurie
    March 2, 2004
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    I have been looking for those bluebells, non in bloom yet!!! Hopefully soon!!! Lovely Andrew!!! ~Laura


  • SusanL
    March 2, 2004
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    At my house it is crocuses..........Yeah Spring!!!!!


  • haikumonk gold member
    March 1, 2004
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    Nice work Andrew.........

    Don


  • Ava Noire silver member
    March 1, 2004
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    This is breathaking - your words are beautifully crafted and the background is lovely as well.


  • NurseChilly gold member
    March 1, 2004
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    If it wasn't so bloody cold here.. I would really get into the mood of this.. but brrrrrrrrrrr it's still too cold.. LIKED THIS ANDREW.. nicely done

  • Pari Ali
    March 1, 2004
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    spring is soon on its way away from here maybe it is heading straight for your river bank i wish there was a river here but am grateful for the sea. one day I must visit England love your writes always painting such lovely inviting pictures.

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